application essays

runxbabyxrun needs help editing her common app essay: her parents say the story doesn't resonate well. Are they right? —Sparkitors

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elephantandcastle wrote this practice college entrance essay and would love your input. What do you think? —Sparkitors

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barneysfriend is struggling with her open-topic common app essay. Do you have any helpful criticism for her? —Sparkitors

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Sarah needs help with her application essay. Read it over and leave your suggestions in the comments!

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Dear Auntie,
I have a pretty serious dilemma. I'm about to be a senior in high school, and for the past 5 years I've been dealing...